992049375 - Oekaki Art 5
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S. Fresh (8-6-2001, 21:17:54, Email):
i don't know about this one. i don't really like how the abdominal area turned out here. somebody gimme an opinion... please? ^_^;

MechaIatneh (9-6-2001, 18:19:6, Email, Website):
I like the pose, and the lighting is where's it's supposed to be, but yea, the midsection dose seem a bit odd.. maybe of the hips were widened? otherwise a great pic!

Jinx (9-6-2001, 23:59:52, Email):
It's evidently the angle you're going for, so my suggestion would be to take those lines above her hips and flip 'em