noname (20-2-2004, 23:2:16):
cant sleep ...........! help?

B-Man (21-2-2004, 11:17:17):
I think you got something going if you could get som more black into it. Maby if you mark the noseline and work the lips some more. I like the compossition, and maby if you put some mor time and effort on this scetchy locking doodle.
Ceep it real!

edpt (21-2-2004, 18:52:18):
It lacks intensity.

Skeletor (23-2-2004, 14:4:32):
I´m with B-Man on this, you should have drawn a couple more lines around the nose and mouth area. Eyes are cool though.